Fragments and Run-Ons - Practice

Fragments and Run-Ons - Practice
The following paragraph contains numerous fragments and run-ons. In the space below
the paragraph, rewrite the paragraph so that it is error-free.
Students at George Brown College have the option of attending classes at one of three
very different campuses these campuses are located in three different parts of the city. The
Waterfront Campus. The newest of the three campuses is located by Sugar Beach. It is home to
Health Sciences, which includes Nursing, dental hygiene, fitness and lifestyle management and
other programs such as medical office administration. Also Pathways to Practical Nursing. And
the PSW program. The Waterfront Campus also has a Tutoring and Learning Centre, which is
located in the library, it is open from 9:00 to 6:00, Monday to Friday. If you need help with
English or math, you can go to meet a tutor. Conversation tutoring also. The TLC at St. James
has a library and all of the TLCs have grammar and math workshops which are free to attend
you should check the website for the latest updates and workshop details.
Tutoring and Learning Centre, George Brown College ©2014
www.georgebrown.ca/tlc
Fragments and Run-Ons - Practice
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Proofreading:
Students at George Brown College have the option of attending classes at one of three very different
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campuses these campuses are located in three different parts of the city. The Waterfront Campus. The
newest of the three campuses is located by Sugar Beach. It is home to Health Sciences, which includes
Nursing, dental hygiene, fitness and lifestyle management and other programs such as medical office
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administration. Also Pathways to Practical Nursing. And the PSW program. The Waterfront Campus also
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has a Tutoring and Learning Centre, which is located in the library, it is open from 9:00 to 6:00, Monday
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to Friday. If you need help with English or math, you can go to meet a tutor. Conversation tutoring also.
The TLC at St. James has a library and all of the TLCs have grammar and math workshops which are free
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to attend you should check the website for the latest updates and workshop details.
Possible Solution:
Students at George Brown College have the option of attending classes at one of three very
different campuses. These campuses are located in three different parts of the city. The
Waterfront Campus, the newest of the three campuses, is located by Sugar Beach. It is home to
Health Sciences, which includes Nursing, dental hygiene, fitness and lifestyle management and
other programs such as medical office administration, Pathways to Practical Nursing, and the
PSW program. The Waterfront Campus also has a Tutoring and Learning Centre, which is
located in the library. It is open from 9:00 to 6:00, Monday to Friday. If you need help with
English or math, you can go to meet a tutor. Conversation tutoring is also available. The TLC at
St. James has a library and all of the TLCs have grammar and math workshops which are free
to attend. You should check the website for the latest updates and workshop details.
Tutoring and Learning Centre, George Brown College ©2014
www.georgebrown.ca/tlc