英語訂正 2015/10/08 by 川口 直人 to 名手 郁人 本文 In historical learning, finding reasonable causal relationship among historical events is important to understand history. However, there is the learner who cannot find reasonable causal relationship. Our approach is to organize states changed by historical events. To date, construction of the system implemented this approach is completed. Current object is to suggest the way of evaluation for our approach and system. In evaluation, first, learner illustrate the figure of causal relationship to take videos of lesson. Second, learner again illustrates the figure to organize states of changed by events. Finally, learner again illustrates. The figure to use our system, to compare the first figure of causal relationship and second one would indicate the influence of to organize states changed by events. To compare second one and final one would indicate the influence of using our system. The next task is to create documents of evaluation, and to practice the evaluation. In addition, to suggest the way of evaluation about previous research is necessary. 修正箇所（1） • タイトルがほしい（英語勉強会 英文ではだめ？ 英語のタイトル？） • historyやhistoricalが多いのでeventとか全部につけなくても文脈で判 断できそう • construction of the system implemented this approach is completed→このアプローチで遂行したシステムの構築が完了しまし た（？）→修飾が多すぎてわかりにくい • Current object ～ system.→ Current approach ～our system.(object?) 修正箇所（2） • ～relationship to take ～→ relationship that is taken from～ • illustrate → illustrates • again illustrates → illustrates ～ again. • Second,～again ～. Finaly, ～again ～. → againが多い？ • The figure to use ～→ The figure used by(in?) • document of evaluation → evaluation experiment (評価実験) • previous research → my previous research(?)(先行研究が何か（誰の か？）わからない) to date • 「今まで」という意味で普段よりもフォーマルな場で用いられることが 多いようです • to・・・（到着点を表して）～まで • date・・・日 date（名詞） • 日付、時代、期日 • 慣用句 • up to date ・・・ 今日までの、最新の • out of date ・・・ 時代遅れの、旧式の date（他動詞） • 日付をつける、年代を定める、時代遅れにする（dated）、年代を示す date（自動詞） • ～から始まる、時代遅れになる、日付がある • 慣用句 • date back ～ ・・・ ～にさかのぼる
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