Figurative Language

Similes, Metaphors, Hyperboles,
Personification, and Idioms
(Literary Devices: Alliteration and
Onomatopoeia)
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Figurative language are the devices used by
authors to create images in your mind.
It is language that appeals to the five senses: smell,
sound, taste, touch, and sight.
The literal meaning is the real meaning. NO
figurative language will be used in the literal
meaning.
They are the “juice” in the hamburger!
Or
The “squeak” in the mouse!
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Figurative language makes the story come
alive!
“Wow. That is a pretty flower. I would like to
pick it.”
Better:
“The flower gently swayed in the breeze as if it
were motioning for us to admire it. Like children
drawn to freshly baked cookies, we carefully
made our way to the delicate symbol of love.”
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Simile
Metaphor
Personification
Idiom
Hyperbole
Onomatopoeia (literary device)
Alliteration (literary device)
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Do not worry. This will be as easy as 1,2,3!
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Comparing two or more things using like or as.
He is as quiet as a church mouse.
She is like a ray of sunshine on a rainy day.
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Let’s look at that again.
He
as
Who or what (the object of the
sentence) that is being compared.
comparison
quiet as a church mouse
He is being compared to a church mouse.
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What the
object is being
compared to.
Let’s look at the second example.
She
like
a ray of
sunshine on a
rainy day
Who or what (the object of the
sentence) that is being
compared.
comparison
What the object is being
compared to.
She is like a ray of sunshine on a rainy day.
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If the sentence has an “as” or a “like” in it, is it
always a simile?
NO!
Remember, the simile MUST compare at least two
things!
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1. He was like a turtle doing his homework.
or
2. He does not like carrots for dinner.
He was like a turtle doing his homework.
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As I ran down the sidewalk I tripped and fell.
or
I am as pretty as a peach.
I am as pretty as a peach.
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Let’s practice. Identify the similes in the
following sentences.
Sally ran like a wild animal after she was scared by
her brother.
Tom was as angry as a black bear woken from it’s
nap.
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More practice with similes…
You are as sweet as a double frosted cupcake!
Trouble follows you like a new born pup to it’s
mother.
I’m so cold my fingers feel like icicles on a cold
December morning.
Hand out and complete practice
worksheet before continuing
PowerPoint.
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The music played softly in my mind like a fallen leaf
floating aimlessly on the placid lake.
Identify the simile in the sentence.
…like a fallen leaf floating aimlessly on the placid lake.
Explain the image you see in your mind after reading
the sentence.
Your answer should include seeing a leaf gently floating on the
top of a clear, calm lake.
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The music played softly in my mind like a fallen
leaf floating aimlessly on the placid lake.
Discuss what you imagine the meaning of the
sentence to be with your classmates. Also, what
tone do you think the author is trying to convey.
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The sun shone on the prairie like a hot iron
scorching a new shirt. Sweat poured from my brow as
I maneuvered the plow through the dirt that felt like
molasses on a cold winter’s day. Gasping for a hot
breath, I gazed upon my land like a thirsty man
desperate for water, my bones already aching at the
prospect of plowing the burnt soil tomorrow.
This one is harder. Identify all of the similes in the
paragraph. What is the author trying to convey to
you? What emotions should you experience after
reading the paragraph? Describe the farmer’s land.
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1. What are the similes used in the paragraph?
like a hot iron scorching a new shirt
like molasses on a cold winter’s day
like a thirsty man desperate for water
2. Describe the conditions of the farm?
There is probably a drought going on. The dirt is very tough to
get through. The man is tired and hot. He is proud of his land,
but he also understands there is a lot of work to be done.
3. What is the mood of this paragraph?
Depressing, exhausting, tiring
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“Oh, I am as nervous as a cat in the dog pound.
Do you really think I look alright in this dress? I
feel like a water balloon ready to burst! I would
just hate to lose this dance competition. I heard
the judge was meaner than a rattlesnake tied to a
mongoose.”
1. What are the similes used in the quote?
2. What is the tone of the speaker in this quote?
3. What do you think the author is trying to
convey to the reader?
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Practice what you have learned by
completing the Simile worksheet.
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A metaphor is a figure of speech that makes a
comparison between two unlike things without using
the words like or as.
Raul was an icicle when he came in from outside.
Was he really an icicle?
Raul?!
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Remember, this is
figurative language. You
cannot take the meaning
literally (for real).
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Sally was a chicken when it came to mountain
climbing.
Was Sally really a chicken?
What was the matter with Sally?
She was afraid to climb a
mountain.
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The boiling soup cascaded over the edge of the pan.
Why is this NOT an example of a metaphor?
BUTTON
There is nothing being compared.
This is literally what is happening
to the soup.
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Maria was the internet on legs!
Is this an example of a metaphor?
YES!
What does it mean?
Maria is very smart.
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Herbert’s mind was a maze filled with dead ends.
?
Is this a metaphor?
YES!
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Complete the Metaphor worksheet that has been given to you.
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Remember, the author
uses figurative language
in order to convey
meaning and create an
image in your mind
without having to use a lot
of boring words.
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Jeff’s life had become a circus filled with
pratfalls and clown suits. His luck couldn’t
possibly get any worse, he thought.
Unfortunately, that thought had barely escaped
his jumbled mind as his foot, nestled in a new
pair of leather dress shoes, settled into the river
that had once been his front yard.
Identify the metaphors used in the paragraph.
become a circus filled with pratfalls and
clown suits, settled into the river that had
once been his front yard
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Jeff’s life had become a circus filled with
pratfalls and clown suits. His luck couldn’t possibly
get any worse, he thought. Unfortunately, that
thought had barely escaped his jumbled mind as his
foot, nestled in a new pair of leather dress shoes,
settled into the river that had once been his front yard.
Jeff’s life was very chaotic and goofy.
If something could go wrong; it did.
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A prison sentence. That is what it felt like. Hours
upon hours of reading and writing in ONE night. Oh,
the pain, the injustice of it all. How do my teachers
identify my Achilles heel so quickly?
What are the examples of metaphors in the
above example?
Prison sentence and Achilles heels
What is the tone of the paragraph?
Resentful, upset, angry
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Complete the Metaphor worksheet.
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Giving a non-human characteristics usually associated
with people.
?
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It’s actually
easier than
you think!
Say a regular bird (like me)
were to start talking to you
while you were walking to
school. If you told
anybody about it, they
would think you were
crazy? Right?
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Personification does not
apply to speaking only.
Humans are able to do all
kinds of fun things. Humans
can skip, whisper, scream,
groan, jump, run, giggle,
think, analyze, sing, and hum
(to name a few things).
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Personification does not
always have to be used with
an animal. Anything can be
given human abilities! A
tree could jump or skip. A
shoe could tell you your
feet smell bad! Maybe a
cloud stops by to say
“hello.” The possibilities
are endless!
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However, if you were reading
a story, having an animal talk
would be okay. So even
though animals don’t
normally talk, author’s will
sometimes give them that
human characteristic.
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me!
Personification
Do you see the word person in the word?
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Did you notice how
your teacher just
followed directions
from a talking candle?
Pretty cool, huh?
That’s why
personification is neat.
It brings things alive!
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Identifying a dog or a cat speaking is pretty easy.
Let’s look at something a lot more difficult.
The wind whistled as it blew past the trees alongside
the house.
Where is the personification in this example?
The wind whistled. Whistled is the human act
taking place.
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The swollen river raced forward tackling everything in
it’s way.
Where is the personification in this sentence?
River raced and tackling
Pop Quiz!
What is the purpose of using figurative language?
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With the author’s purpose in mind, what image is the
author trying to demonstrate with the example
below?
The swollen river raced forward tackling everything in
it’s way.
The river is extremely powerful and destructive.
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The sun smiled upon the children as they played
football on the freshly mowed lawn. Drenched
in sweat, the players barely noticed as the wind
gently caressed their cheeks with a cool breeze.
Explain the personification taking place in the
example above.
Describe the picture you see in your mind? Is it a
winter day? Is it night time?
Is the wind blowing hard?
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How did you know the information from the
previous page?
Did the author state the boys were playing
during the day?
Did the author mention that the breeze was
gentle and refreshing?
What type of mood did the author create
without explicitly (directly) stating it
directly?
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Complete the worksheet on personification.
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Idioms come from different sources. There are literally
hundreds of idiomatic expressions.
An idiom is a saying whose meaning cannot be taken
literally.
It’s meaning cannot be understood from the individual
words in the saying.
Behind the Shake a leg
eight ball
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from the frying pan into the fire
What does it mean?
Did you guess it means to go from a bad situation to a
worse one?
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My teacher has eyes in the back of her head!
This idiom is actually true!
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Many idioms may only be understood when they
are taken in the context they are given.
Do you remember what context clues are?
Context clues are those hints given within the
text that help you to understand a word, phrase,
or an entire paragraph.
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I had to eat my words.
To eat my words is the idiom.
What does the idiom mean?
Does the person REALLY have to eat their
words?
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Let’s see if adding context clues helps you figure
out what the idiom means.
I was so mad at my friend, Bernice! I couldn’t
believe she said those things about me.
I told Bernice, in no uncertain terms, exactly how I
felt about her.
Later, I found out Bernice hadn’t said anything bad
about me. I had to eat my words and apologize to
Bernice. I don’t know if she will ever forgive me.
Can you figure out what the idiom means now?
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Fred was on top of the world.
The world is round and rather large. It would be
impossible to be on top of a round surface. Therefore,
you may not take this idiom literally.
Can you
guess what
this idiom
means?
Meet Fred.
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Let’s add some context clues to help you make a
logical guess as to what the idiom means.
Fred, the green frog, was on top of the world
because he had caught the most flies in the fly
catching contest. He was very happy about
winning because he received a crown and a
truckload of flies. He smiled from ear to ear
when the crowd cheered his achievement.
What do you think the idiom
means?
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Brenda was really down in the dumps after she
lost her wallet filled with money.
Choose the best meaning for the idiom.
A.Brenda smelled funny because she had been to
the dump.
B. Brenda was very sad because she had lost her
money.
C. Brenda was feeling happy after she got rid of her
wallet.
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Harry had butterflies in his stomach because he had to
sing in front of the audience.
A.Harry was nervous about performing.
B. Harry’s stomach was upset after eating a monarch salad.
C. Harry hated to sing in front of anyone.
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There’s no sense crying over spilled milk. You’ve
already failed the test because you didn’t study for it.
A.Milk will spoil unless tears are added to it.
B. Studying for a test will spoil the milk which will
cause you to fail.
C. There isn’t anything to be done because the grade is
already earned.
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If you find yourself getting into trouble often, it may
be time to turn over a new leaf.
A.If you get into a lot of trouble, you should always
blame someone else.
B. Wearing a new leaf with prevent people from seeing
you do something bad.
C. You should change your behavior if you get into
trouble frequently.
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Is it possible for an idiom to be a simile or metaphor?
Hint: This question is actually as easy as
pie.
Yes, an idiom may be
written as a simile or
metaphor.
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Hi-per-bo-lee
A hyperbole is an exaggeration. It is used to express
very strong feelings about something.
’I’m so
hungry I
could eat a
horse!!
WHAT?!!!
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How do you say this word?
I have to be
honest. Kids are
THE best at saying
hyperboles! True
story. You don’t
believe me?
Watch.
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I am NEVER going to get
this! I’ll be, like, 20 before I
finish this homework!
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You are my best
friend in the whole
entire world!
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I’m going to be
grounded for
LIFE!!
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You are the meanest
Mom EVER!!
Said by every child
throughout history!
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Ugh, huh!
Told you so!
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Remember, hyperbole is a statement that would be
impossible to come true.
These shoes are so comfortable, I could walk a million
miles in them today.
It would be impossible to walk a million miles in one day.
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Choose the example that includes a hyperbole.
A. My dog needs to go on a diet because she is overweight.
B. My dog weighs more than an elephant!
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A.The stars in the sky blinded me with their
brilliance.
B. Wow, look at how bright that star is in the sky!
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A.I died a thousand deaths when my pet worm
died while I was at school.
B. I felt really bad when I found out my pet worm
had died while I was at school.
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Comparing two or more things using
“like” or “as.”
1. What is a simile?
2. Which example contains a simile?
A. My dog is friendlier than your dog because I feed her
Alpo dog food.
B. My dog acts like a wind-up doll after drinking a pot of
coffee when she sees me.
3.
Why does an author use figurative language in their
writing?
An author uses figurative language to convey a
message or image in the mind of the reader.
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Identify the figurative language being used in each sentence.
1. The lemons dangled from the branches begging for a sip of
Personification
water from the sprinkler.
2. The amount of respect I have for you is an endless spring
fed well.
3. Time drifts by like molten lava on a snow capped
mountain.
4. I swear I was bitten by a hundred mosquitos last night.
5. I’m in the doghouse after the disrespectful manner in
which I treated my mother.
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Metaphor
Simile
Hyperbole
Idiom
Onomatopoeia uses words that imitate or suggest the
sound of what they describe.
Grrrrrr!
Boom! Boom!
Hiss
Sizzle!
Sizzle!
Squeak!
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Author’s often use onomatopoeia to set the mood or
tone of the story.
As the prisoner made his agonizing way to the scaffold he
could hear the deep “boom, boom, boom,” resonating off the
damp, stone walls of the penitentiary. Desperately, the
prisoner scanned the faces of the crowd looking for hope
where there was none.
“Boom, boom, boom.”
The prisoner felt the pull of the drums as they led him to
the gallows.
What mood is the author trying to convey?
Hopelessness, gloominess
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Tommy could hear the bark of the dog off in the distance.
He lazily thought about getting up and going home.
Suddenly, “Bang!”
Darting up into a prone position, Tommy looked across the
wheat field toward the McDonny Farm.
“What was that?” Tommy thought.
“Bang, bang,” went the noise again.
Squinting his eyes, Tommy could just make out the
McDonny boys as they scampered out from behind the tree.
Both boys held play guns in their hands.
“Ah,” mused Tommy. “That would explain the noise.”
Does the use of the sounds add to the story?
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Alliteration occurs when the first sound in the word
repeats itself in the sentence.
Remember, it is the
SOUND, not the letter, that
repeats.
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Sometimes, as I seek the sun on a cloudy day, I am
reminded of hot summer days and cherry slushies.
What sound do you hear being repeated in
the sentence?
S
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How about this sentence?
How could you have left me when I am so hungry in my hopes of
finding someone with as huge of a heart as you to love and cherish?
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Explain why this sentence does not contain alliteration.
A cupid in the city of Cincinnati went to church to find the can
of chorizo.
Remember, it is the beginning sound that must be found in the
sentence, not the letter.
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Create your own example of alliteration
using the sound given to you by your teacher.
The sentence should make sense.
The sentence should contain at least 10 words.
The alliteration should be easy to detect.
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