英語勉強会 2015_10_22

英語勉強会
10/13住谷English
2015 10/21 三木 裕太
原文
ピリオドがない
• The purpose of this study is Development of system for Automated
Generation of Deformed Maps. My study become deformation using a
heart rate and positional information as user data and Map information in
Kokudotiriin This report succeeded by the acquisition in map information
and users heart rate. We can acquire heart rate from an actual machine by
recording Apple Developer. Because Map information was described in
XML file by GML form, we analyzed them using XML parser and acquired
only necessary information.
• GML(Geography Markup Language)is based on XML. It leverages a wealth
of standards, tools and practices for data exchange being developed by
several consortia around the world. We can display in conjunction with
various information and process in combination different types information.
• Future plans, First, We are necessary to arrange an XML file of the map
information. Secondly We draw a map using the acquired coordinate.
全体のコメント
• 文中なのに大文字から始まる文字が存在
• Ex. The purpose of this study is Development of system for Automated
Generation of Deformed Maps.
Future plans, First, We are necessary to arrange an XML file of the map
information.
• myとweを統一
• タイトルがない
• Acquiring Map Information to Describe Deformation Map
2文目
• My study become deformation using a heart rate and positional
information as user data and Map information in Kokudotiriin
• 私の研究はデフォルメすることではない
デフォルメマップの作成支援では?
• 並列の関係
• 3つ以上のときは Takuma, Sakata and Watanabe のように使用
• 国土地理院
• Kokudo chiri-in, The Geographical Survey Institute
Our study is supporting to create a map deformed by using user’s
heart rate, positional information and map information in Kokudo
chiri-in.
3文目
• This report succeeded by the acquisition in map information and
users heart rate.
• レポートは成功しない
マップの取得が成功したことのレポート
• acquisition in map information: inは不適切
• アポストロフィーが抜けている
This presentation reports about success of acquiring map information
and a user’s heart rate.
4文目
• We can acquire heart rate from an actual machine by recording Apple
Developer.
• 心拍数を取得するのはシステム
• record→register
The system can obtain a user’s heart rate from an actual machine by
registering Apple Developer.
5文目
• Because Map information was described in XML file by GML form, we
analyzed them using XML parser and acquired only necessary
information.
• 前置詞が抜けている
• GMLの正式名称を書いた後に略称
• GMLで記述されているのでは?
Map information was described in Geography Markup Language
(GML) that is the XML grammar defined by the Open Geospatial
Consortium (OGC) to express geographical features. Therefore, we
analyzed them by using “XML parser” and acquired only necessary
information to create the deformation map.
6・7文目
• GML(Geography Markup Language)is based on XML. It leverages a
wealth of standards, tools and practices for data exchange being
developed by several consortia around the world.
• leverage…影響力を行使する
• consortia…コンソーシア, 研究組合
8文目
• We can display in conjunction with various information and process in
combination different types information.
• 地図情報をつなげて新しい道を表示するという話?
最後
• Future plans, First, We are necessary to arrange an XML file of the
map information. Secondly We draw a map using the acquired
coordinate.
• Future plans → For future work
• First, Second, … Last or Firstly, Secondly, … Finally
• XML fileをアレンジするの?
For future work, we need to classify GML data as necessary ones or
not. In addition, it is necessary to develop a system that draws a map
with coordinate of GML data.
接続詞
• 帰結
• Therefore, Thus, According to, Accordingly, For this reason
• 原因
• because, since
• 追加
• furthermore, moreover, additionally, in addition
• 逆説
• however, on the other hand, in spite that, in contrast
※butやand, soは文頭では使用しない
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